I find this very odd. I've seen this years ago (I think 3 years ago) and it's the same thing. 3 stars because I find this very suspicious. The whole animation was great with the idea and sense of humor and very simple concept.
Music is good. Presentation needs work. Keep going at it.
Pretty good. Would like a preloader before it starts playing though.
Yeah, preloader is there now.
This game is AWESOME!!!
I can't wait for GatherUp!
I have no idea what character I was, I got confused but the puzzles took a while for me to finish up.
Now how do I save it on to my computer? Print Scan isn't responding.
Wow man, that was really good. Kudos to you dude!
That's the main end. But the rest is like 2012.
Wow, didn't see that coming!
Compared to the original, it sounds more like the dragos had a bigger part in the game.
Wow. I didn't think I'd done that good a job. Thanks!
Thanks for the review!
Not much into furries but okey.
For some reason the dialog here just doesn't seem to fit their character's characteristic...Characteristics, where are they? It looks like you just threw in some words to make it full of particles of a story. Since this is a serious-ish story, I recommend that you make it give the audience an intense feeling and let them be surprised at how one interacts with another and transforms the entire atmosphere of the reactions with the character's result.
*notes- When making a comic, spell check often
The last part is what I can't understand, why did she suddenly start to make a fight?
Also you have to check on your grammar. Some words are misplaced and missing here.
Just remember: This is your comic and you can make it better by taking advice, or finding a better way to improve.
Your absulutly right and I appreciate the feedback the biggest hinderence to the diolog was the font it's just to big but I could get anything else to look right.
and I know I am a horrendous speller!
I don't understand how Kingdom Hearts can somewhat relate to furrys. Although, they can be in any form. It is a good picture and somehow, it works, but, it won't be what I would enjoy to see when yiff happens.
It's like a game cover or a poster for retro type things!
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